Celibel Capellan Prof. Ewan FIQWS 05-15-2019 What A Ride Dear, Professor Ewan At the very start of this course I did not know what was going to occur throughout this writing course.When writing the papers assignments, I did not expect the type of emotions that I would feel and the writing improvement that I would see just by using what this course had taught me in a few months. This course taught me many things such as how to write in MLA format, how to use signal phrases, how to use the college library database, how to come up with …
A Peer Review Made By A Classmate (Unedited)
Dear Celibel, I liked how you connected the experiences of the charcters in the book with your experiences. It shows that you really connected with the book and characters. One of the first things I noticed is that your tite isn’t clear (“New of Doing Thinking”). When doing the full source introduction don’t forget that you have to includethe author’s name. I think that after you state that Sharon Draper helped the authors you should say why she did so. The line after that you say “Both Dr.Davis and Dr.Hunt grew up to be an emergency physician in their life,”. …
A Peer Review On A Classmate Literacy Narrative (Edited)
Dear Mabel, I really enjoyed reading and reviewing your paper on how your different writing experiences had helped you become a more expressible person compared to how you were in the past. Your paper had the correct MLA format that we are required to have. The way you wrote your narrative made it very easy to understand and digest because of how straightforward and direct it was. It also was very detailed and organized when a new book or experience was being introduced. As much as I enjoyed your narrative, there were still things that had to be modified. A small …
Expository Essay Reflection (Edited)
Celibel Capellan Prof. Ewan FIQWS 04-15-2019 So Much Time When working on the expository and concept paper it took a lot of time and reviewing. It was a paper that took a lot of my time during the weekend. It took a lot of time to go over and check whether I had everything. I looked over misspelled words, the requirements sheet, my peer review partner suggestions on blackboard, and the clarity of my paper. These were things that kept roaming my mind when trying to edit the expository essay. At first I did not know what I was supposed …
Expository Essay (Edited)
Celibel Capellan Prof. Ewan FIQWS 04-08-2019 Research Proposal: Puppetry In Children Education When thinking about puppetry I would always assume or think of them as a form of entertainment, something that someone can create on their own and use it as as way to make entertainment for someone or a group of people, but ever since getting into this course and learning more about them, that assumption changed. Now I view puppetry as something that can be used for a variety of things beside for entertainment and laughter such as teaching in children’s education. Puppetry being used in children education …
Expository Essay Draft (Unedited)
Celibel Capellan Prof. Ewan FIQWS 04-03-2019 What Are The Impacts Of Puppetry On Children Education? In history puppetry was seen as a form of entertainment that uses puppets as a way to entertain people. It did not matter whether the people were young or old puppets were still made to entertain. However, as time went on, puppetry is now being seen and used as a tool to help educate children in their education. Puppets used in children education had supposably shown a great influence on a child learning. Whether it’s their behavior,interaction, or how/what they learn through the course of …
Critical Argument Essay Reflection (Edited)
Celibel Capellan Prof. Ewan FIQWS 05-06-2019 Argumentative Reflection When hearing what this assignment was going to be about , I got super nervous and scared to do it throughout the break even though it was just a draft. The reason why I felt scared and nervous about doing this essay was because of my over thinking and feeling like I was going to pass but fail at the same time. So, when gathering information for my argumentative I’ve noticed that the process or time it took for me to gather them became shorter. The peer review from my partner in …
Critical Argument Essay (Edited)
Celibel Capellan Prof. Ewan FIQWS 05-01-2019 The Involvement of Minorities American Movies In the history of making film, a lot of things such as the way one is displayed and the way productions are done have gone through a lot of changes throughout the years. Those changes had to do with the change in era, the upgrade in technology, and what the people like but, can one really say that what is being displayed on today’s movies has really changed? With what is being displayed or involved in today’s film of course has changed, such as the type of people …
Critical Argument Essay Draft (Unedited)
Celibel Capellan Prof. Ewan FIQWS 04-29-2019 The Involvement of Minorities In American Movies In the history of film making a lot of things such as the way one are displayed, and the way production, direction are done had changed throughout the years. Those changes has to do with the change in era, the upgrade in technology, and what the people like but, can one really say that what is being displayed on today’s movies had really changed? With what is being displayed or involved in today’s film of course had changed such as the type of people that are being …
Narrative Literacy Reflection (Edited)
Celibel Capellan Prof. Ewan FIQWS 03-11-2019 Getting It Over With Writing a literacy narrative is something that I did not know how to write until now. Yes, it’s just a story based on a piece of writing or book that had impacted or helped you in some type of way. But even with knowing that, trying to get something on paper and still manage to make it understandable was something I struggled with in this assignment. At the beginning, I started rocky and disorganized. I confused the due dates of the paper leading me to have a horrible first draft …